literature

Who Am I?

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Can you see me in this light?
Can you tell I'm here?
How do I look?

Can you tell who I am today?

My personality changes and I'm never the same
I'll brush right past you and never look back
You'll be left in tears by words I leave unsaid

Have you guessed who I am today?

I like to take orders and have people tell me what to do
I am weak and can never think for myself

See who I am yet?

I hide myself behind people and never speak my mind
I nod my head and agree to anything they say
I'm never a leader and always a follower
I flourish in darkness and hide from the light
Shadows are my friends and I tend to cower in them

Can you guess now?
Have you seen who I am today?

I've made it easy for you to see
I've given you so many clues
I think it's plain to see
So obvious
that today I'm being you
I wrote this in high school about someone who is the lowest form of human.
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MattVoscinar's avatar
I really like the premise of this poem but I feel like you could expand on it and make it even better. The repeating questions is a very nice touch.

I also think you could avoid the cliches you use "Flourish in darkness/hide from light" "Leader/follower"

In the same light, that shadows line is absolutely amazing.