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Can you see me in this light?
Can you tell I'm here?
How do I look?
Can you tell who I am today?
My personality changes and I'm never the same
I'll brush right past you and never look back
You'll be left in tears by words I leave unsaid
Have you guessed who I am today?
I like to take orders and have people tell me what to do
I am weak and can never think for myself
See who I am yet?
I hide myself behind people and never speak my mind
I nod my head and agree to anything they say
I'm never a leader and always a follower
I flourish in darkness and hide from the light
Shadows are my friends and I tend to cower in them
Can you guess now?
Have you seen who I am today?
I've made it easy for you to see
I've given you so many clues
I think it's plain to see
So obvious
that today I'm being you
Can you tell I'm here?
How do I look?
Can you tell who I am today?
My personality changes and I'm never the same
I'll brush right past you and never look back
You'll be left in tears by words I leave unsaid
Have you guessed who I am today?
I like to take orders and have people tell me what to do
I am weak and can never think for myself
See who I am yet?
I hide myself behind people and never speak my mind
I nod my head and agree to anything they say
I'm never a leader and always a follower
I flourish in darkness and hide from the light
Shadows are my friends and I tend to cower in them
Can you guess now?
Have you seen who I am today?
I've made it easy for you to see
I've given you so many clues
I think it's plain to see
So obvious
that today I'm being you
Literature
Silence
Silence deafens
It screams at me from blank walls so I fill them with photographs
So they’ll seem less empty, and so will I
Silence welcomes
When the world is just too loud and too chaotic and too restless
And all I want in this moment is quiet
Silence echoes
From the depths of the empty beer bottles that line my bedside table
They promised fulfillment or at least escape the night before
Silence lies
It tells me that I am not good enough for a house filled with love
The kind that comes from the heart of a man
Silence comes
The moment I lay my child’s sleepy head to rest and surround her with pillows
So that she may never know
Literature
| processing and thinking
You know when you're writing a poem and you don't like what you typed
you can hit the backspace key
and back goes the space until you are satisfied with the outcome
but what is satisfaction when just a moment ago you had something to say
and now that one key has taken it away?
But then suddenly you have something better to type
maybe worded in a better way
and you're so happy as your fingers hit the keys
your thoughts spilling out onto the page like liquid
until you read your new, revised version and the outcome is not what you expected
when the mood is not set correctly
and the expected impact of your words becomes rejected
Not only a
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Into the Rain
Your presence teases me,
Makes me believe that I see you
Out of the corner of my eye,
Standing in the alleyways,
Or hiding behind bookshelves.
I see a glimpse of you,
And then you're gone,
Shoulders fading from view.
Something makes me follow,
Rush to where I saw you
And look wildly for another sign
That you're still here.
I follow you through storms,
Rain so fierce it's almost blinding,
Chasing your smile only
For you to turn away and disappear
Each time I think I've found you.
When I finally catch up with you,
Just when I can't go any further,
You're somewhere I can't reach you;
You're with people I don't know,
Perched high on a balcony,
Or
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I wrote this in high school about someone who is the lowest form of human.
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I really like the premise of this poem but I feel like you could expand on it and make it even better. The repeating questions is a very nice touch.
I also think you could avoid the cliches you use "Flourish in darkness/hide from light" "Leader/follower"
In the same light, that shadows line is absolutely amazing.
I also think you could avoid the cliches you use "Flourish in darkness/hide from light" "Leader/follower"
In the same light, that shadows line is absolutely amazing.